Wedding vows...
“Would you like to read your vows now?” the minister enquired
“Yes I would”, said Preeti.
The first time I walked through these lonely roads
I felt lost and scared
A wave of insecurity swept through me
But then I met you
And I came to realize that,
I had a reason to wake up every single morning
I had a reason to remember dates on the calendar
I had a reason to choose what I am wearing
I had a reason to explore the world
I had a reason to LIVE
All I need from you is the promise that you will be by my side every single day….
And then Joe read out his
Sometimes as I look up into the sky
And see the stars shining ever so brightly upon me,
I wonder, “What did I do to deserve such an angel?”
Somehow, “Forever” seems too small a time
In comparison to the time I want to spend with you…
Years later
She was looking through the window waiting for him. It had become quite a routine for Joe to not come home for days together. The only reason she could wedge out of him was work, work and more work. They hardly saw each other during the weekdays and collaborated the week’s happenings only during the weekends. However during the past few months even that had become difficult. Life’s pace had pretty much taken its toll over them.
The papers were on the table and a sign from him was all that was required to validate their legal separation. She had called his office assistant and left a message for him. She just was as scared as she was on her wedding day. She had opposed pretty much everyone she knew to marry Joe and now she was faced with the very same opposition which was ironically stronger now than ever before.
She knew not whether the decision that she was taking was right or wrong but all she knew was that love had become virtually nonexistent between them. Their relationship had become more of a burden that neither was interested in carrying.
As she packed her bags that night to leave for another city, she still took one piece of paper with her; the wedding vows that they had written for each other. Sometimes echos from the past, however distant they may be, keep ringing in your ears for eternity!
“Yes I would”, said Preeti.
The first time I walked through these lonely roads
I felt lost and scared
A wave of insecurity swept through me
But then I met you
And I came to realize that,
I had a reason to wake up every single morning
I had a reason to remember dates on the calendar
I had a reason to choose what I am wearing
I had a reason to explore the world
I had a reason to LIVE
All I need from you is the promise that you will be by my side every single day….
And then Joe read out his
Sometimes as I look up into the sky
And see the stars shining ever so brightly upon me,
I wonder, “What did I do to deserve such an angel?”
Somehow, “Forever” seems too small a time
In comparison to the time I want to spend with you…
Years later
She was looking through the window waiting for him. It had become quite a routine for Joe to not come home for days together. The only reason she could wedge out of him was work, work and more work. They hardly saw each other during the weekdays and collaborated the week’s happenings only during the weekends. However during the past few months even that had become difficult. Life’s pace had pretty much taken its toll over them.
The papers were on the table and a sign from him was all that was required to validate their legal separation. She had called his office assistant and left a message for him. She just was as scared as she was on her wedding day. She had opposed pretty much everyone she knew to marry Joe and now she was faced with the very same opposition which was ironically stronger now than ever before.
She knew not whether the decision that she was taking was right or wrong but all she knew was that love had become virtually nonexistent between them. Their relationship had become more of a burden that neither was interested in carrying.
As she packed her bags that night to leave for another city, she still took one piece of paper with her; the wedding vows that they had written for each other. Sometimes echos from the past, however distant they may be, keep ringing in your ears for eternity!
29 Comments:
At March 31, 2008 at 10:36 AM , Abhidnya said...
Hey Anu..
Good Work..so finally after a long time you got some time to write a blog..good keep it up...
Abhidnya
At March 31, 2008 at 12:45 PM , Nivi said...
Your last lines swept me away!
Way to go. This is what I love about the short stories. Beautiful!
And true isnt sometimes eternity is just a few years away!
Good going dude
At March 31, 2008 at 1:37 PM , Ajay said...
Hey anu...
I am in love with the poetry part... Marvellous... Just goes on to show how certain people influence our lives to the extent that we change everything for them.. Great going.. do write regularly.. waiting for next one
At March 31, 2008 at 2:20 PM , Dhivya said...
Nice story though it was kinda short... I wish u had developed it somemore.
I really liked the last line though...You've proved again that u have tat sought after poetic flair!
At March 31, 2008 at 4:04 PM , Anu said...
@Abhi
thx for the comments!!! that too first one
yeah i have written one after nearly a hiatus of 2 months... hope u liked reading it
@nivi
hey thx dude...somehow i have always been in love with the word "eternity" :-)
@aj
hey glad u like it so much da... watta do im not getting the time or the inspiration due to bloody hectic schedule
Hopefully i should pen one soon.. even i miss writing them :-(
At March 31, 2008 at 4:06 PM , Anu said...
@dhivya
i don know it was jus a scene in my head... probably thats why it has come out that way
it was more of depicting jus one scene from a story rather than the story itself
hope u liked it...
At April 1, 2008 at 8:31 AM , Unknown said...
HaiAnu
It is nice to see you writing a blog after a long interval. The poetry part is wonderful. certain sweet moments of the past always lingers in the minds. It is short and sweet. Wish to read more of your blog.
MOM and DAD
At April 1, 2008 at 9:09 AM , Fishy said...
hi Anu,
Worth the wait. Really Good. Liked the lingering thoughts.. left the story to continue.. than an end.
At April 1, 2008 at 9:55 AM , RAM said...
hey anu,
why u always go for a sad end why don't u think of something +ve when it comes to climax ha.. next time u blog make sure it's really +ve one.
but it was a nice one.
Ram
At April 1, 2008 at 6:17 PM , cm chap said...
Excellent...
And I came to realize that,
I had a reason to LIVE - Emotions at its high.
Somehow, “Forever” seems too small a time - That's masterpiece
As I read the end, the feeling in me was.... ho come on dnt leave it that way, there needs to be solution for it.
At April 2, 2008 at 2:39 PM , Karthik Balasubramanian said...
Oh my god.. writing like this requires quite a bit of inspiration.. dont know whats making u write, but its doing a pretty good job..
At April 2, 2008 at 4:09 PM , Anu said...
@dad
thx a long... yeah i have received some complaints regarding the blog being short :-)... but this is exactly the way i wanted to paint it. glad u liked the conciseness of it
@fishy
yeah it was not an ending... u have understood it really well... it was jus a phase from which preeti had to move on
@Ram
life is not always a bed of roses... We should never regret the fact that it got over, we should be happy that it did happen and gave us happiness while it lasted...
i belive this story was not negative. it was jus somethin she had to do in order to find happiness... but she dosent regret for having married him... she cherishes it!
At April 2, 2008 at 4:11 PM , Anu said...
@cm-chap
Sometimes in life, moving on is the best solution.... i don think we need to live in the past or be tied up to somethin that we don care about anymore but fortunately or unfortunately "memories always linger"....
so there goes the solution....
but i am glad you liked it!! :-)
@b.k
hey glad u liked it da... thx :-)
At April 2, 2008 at 4:14 PM , germinal dreamer said...
again beautiful...
I must confess i love ur blog... esp ur short stories... blog rolling u :)
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At April 4, 2008 at 1:57 AM , Raksha said...
Hi Anu
Read yr blog and loved it. Dear Mr Abhilash
This is Raksha Bharadia. I am compiling Chicken soup for the Indian Teen soul and am still about 10 stories short. Would you like to send in something?
The themes are:
1. Issues dealing with self esteem
2. Peer pressure
3. Issues dealing with drugs, money, smoking etc.
4. Relationships with parents, friends,
5. Tough stuff
6. Making a Difference
7. Going for it / Reaching for Goals
8. A Learning which has helped you in life
9. Overcoming obstacles
10. Dealing with exam tension
11. Dealing with suicidal thoughts
This title would consist of stories, poems, and cartoons of life, love, and learning every teenager can relate to and learn from without feeling criticized or judged.
In"Losing the ‘Us,'" sixteen-year-old Lia discovers the difficulties of finding one's individuality after ending a long-term relationship. Actress Jenny Garth describes her concept of home in "I am Home." in "Be Cool…Stay in School," Jason describes a program his school developed to prevent students from dropping out. Frank, a high school student, performs a selfless and random act of kindness in "Reaching Out to a Stranger."
Written in common language with a non-didactic tone, Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul offers stories that cover common teen emotions and problems. These emotions cross all ethnic, socioeconomic and gender lines.
The write-ups need to be true life stories and can be anything between 300-1200 words.
We carry a 4 line profile on the contributing authors along with contact info. Chicken soup for the Indian Teenage soul will be an international release. We take up blogged work and published work too.
The stories need not be just by mothers and teenagers. Anyone can contribute.
One can even write anonymous or in the third person.
Please write to me on rakshabharadia@gmail.com. Last date of accepting submissions is 15th April 2008
Regs
Raksha Bharadia
p.s. You can Google search my name and know more about me.
P.S check this out…. Chicken Soup for the Soul, Indian ishtyle!
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--
Raksha
At April 6, 2008 at 12:35 AM , Sesh said...
Nannaitu undu :)
Continue posting such nice ones man..
At April 6, 2008 at 10:53 AM , N!kh!l said...
Nice post. Most of the times its true that more than the destination whats fascinating is the journey. So once we get what we want we no longer want it. Thats life. Oops no more philosophy :-)
At April 7, 2008 at 10:42 AM , navien said...
Hey it was nice but felt it was a dab short. Nice to see your blog after a long hiatus!!
At April 7, 2008 at 3:52 PM , Prakash A said...
Hi Anu...
Am able to feel the sorrow and the pain that carries out in a heart of a parting luv... gud one!!! expecting more !!! Keep rocking Anu..
Cheers
Praks.
At April 9, 2008 at 3:02 PM , ash89 said...
its a beautiful story... touching
At April 14, 2008 at 9:26 AM , Destination Infinity said...
The over expectations of immature minds swept over by the hard sense of REALITY? Good one.
Destination Infinity.
At April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM , Kartik said...
hey nice post An... felt it was short but was really good.. am sorry for my laaaaaaaaaattttte comments.. Was konjam busy An .. thts y !! c u sooooon
At April 17, 2008 at 10:02 AM , Anu said...
@sesh
thx da :-)
@nikhil
its ok... philosophies are welcome on my page :-)
@Navien
thx... glad u found time :-)
@prakash
thx dude
At April 17, 2008 at 10:04 AM , Anu said...
@ash
thx... welcome to my blog and keep visiting!
@destination infinity
beautifully worded!! thx again
@bka
dei dog... appadi enna da velai??? anyways thx. glad u cud find time!!
At June 17, 2008 at 2:05 PM , Ashish Sharma said...
Hi Anu,
Liked your blog, and its touchy and kinda reality in todays world..it seems like the story of some big metropolitan city where everyone is just running behind more materialistic things compared to love and togetherness.
Ashish
At June 18, 2008 at 10:54 PM , Anu said...
@Ashish
hey thanks a lot!! glad u liked it!
welcome to my blog page and do keep visiting!!
in a sense u r right... the cities have raised huge buildings but humanity by itself has shriveled out into minute insignificance...
At June 21, 2008 at 7:46 PM , adithya said...
THe Vows were awesome.... and i always used to wonder how people can ever come up with great vows... and i am pretty sure i cant.. Anyways now I know which vow to steal if at all i have to say it :)... hope there is no copy right on usign it...
"Sometimes echos from the past, however distant they may be, keep ringing in your ears for eternity!"
WHAT A LINE!!!!... very very true... and sometimes i dont think we can let bygones be bygones... they justt end up echoing somewhere in that corner of the brain where you store them in a trash bag and it keeps jumping out and not getting recycled eh?
Very neat and subtle.. I think you know what exactly and precisely to write...something which i just got to learn....
not a very happy ending!!That makes me like the story all the more :)
At June 28, 2008 at 2:40 PM , Anu said...
@adi
of course u can use the vows :-) u have got my special permission...but i wanna be there to c u read it :)
yeah howmuch ever we try to forget some things, we may not be able to... Alas our brains are not formattable whenever reqd... but in a way, we learn.. it helps put a foot fwd in the future
im not a huge believer of "endings"... and hence i don believe in "happily ever after" either... The story just goes on... it never had a beginning, it may never have an ending
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