Little Miss Sunshine!!

A pinch of salt, a spoonful of sugar,a mixture of condiments,a dollop of cream... so are my stories, so are my dreams!

Friday, June 22, 2007

A Sweet Poison


I seem to have loved you,
In numberless forms, numberless times,
In life after life, in age after age forever.
My spell-bound heart has made and
re-made the necklace of songs
That you take as a gift,
wear round your neck in your many forms,
In life after life, in age after age forever.


-Rabindranath Tagore

Quoted above is an extract from one of my favorite poems. All I have to say is that it can also act as a sweet poison! Read on to find out how?

A Sweet Poison

13 Comments:

  • At June 24, 2007 at 6:50 AM , Blogger ajaygroups said...

    Hey atom,

    I have run out of superlatives to complement ur posts.Grrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeaaaaaatttttttt!!!.

    I was a bit baffled by the PDF idea... neverthless nice one for a change... You are becoming obsessed with murdering one guy or the other in ur blogs.. Watch out guys.. here is An... our new serial killer... Just Joking!!! :-) Hey the plot was very good but i do believe that if u love someone so deeply and are angered by some of his/her actions even be it marrying or falling in love with someone else i dont think a true lover would take such drastic steps... May be he didnt love her becos she was a physcho..Well ! Opinions differ and so do people.. Great language and improvisation.. Easily ur best Post to date...

    P.S. I Dunno why u scrapped the part of us coming out with motives

     
  • At June 24, 2007 at 7:01 AM , Blogger Nivi said...

    REal good way of writing it.. i liked the style a lot.. The best thing was the shortness and hence the crispness of it man..well done there

    Did i miss something i mean i got the motive ,i was expecting a how?
    So how did she do it??

     
  • At June 24, 2007 at 12:31 PM , Blogger Anu said...

    @ajay
    thx a lot dude for all the superlatives!
    Well im not talking abt true love here. Richa's brain is a bit disoriented and hence she does these things
    Feedback here means jus how u like it... it had nothing to do with the motive :-)

    @nivi
    Hey thx!
    Well how she did it is kinda left to the imagination of the reader...

    She could have injected the stuff or interchanged a cyanide rat killer aerosol with the inhaler instrument or she could have pried open the inhaler contents and dropped cyanide powder into it etc...its purely left to imagination

     
  • At June 24, 2007 at 3:09 PM , Blogger CM-Chap said...

    Aiming for a professional career n writing?

     
  • At June 24, 2007 at 10:55 PM , Blogger Anu said...

    @cm-chap
    i take that as a compliment dude! :-)

     
  • At June 25, 2007 at 9:51 AM , Blogger navien said...

    Anu,such a gr888888 post yaar!!! Very crisp and stylish way of writing!!:) Again a wonderful suspense thriller:)

    Its true that she even though knew him since Sid was knee high to a grasshopper was forced to resort to such drastic n knee-jerk response in dis kinda circumstances. True love when tinted , propels a person to react in an unexpected manner s absolutely agreeable.

    Twist was very good towards d end!! ..Never felt Richa wud ve done dis..
    The whole enchilada was interestin n grippin!!Way to go!! Ur best post till date!!

     
  • At June 25, 2007 at 9:53 AM , Blogger Confessions of a Born Procrastinator said...

    i guess u already know what i am gonna say... so i ll save that part... :)

    Between... beautifully presented... u got talent... Do include me in the "Thank you's" speech when you bag that booker prize... :D

     
  • At June 25, 2007 at 11:59 PM , Blogger BKa said...

    Hey An super post..... I ve become a fan of ur suspense and mystery stories.. Expect to see many more !!!

     
  • At June 26, 2007 at 2:02 AM , Blogger Anu said...

    @navien
    Thx dude! i did add certain stuff later jus to confuse u guys!!:-)

    @confessions
    hmmm thx!booker prize....whoa u have more ambitions for me then i do!:-) glad abt that!! will surely include u in my thank you speech....IF i win it("if, a two letter word for futility!"-sheldon)

    @b.k
    glad to know i have a FAN!!!:-) thx a lot da :-)

     
  • At June 26, 2007 at 9:38 PM , Blogger CM-Chap said...

    Offcourse it was said as a compliment only... Sorry if the tone made u to guess other way.

     
  • At June 27, 2007 at 12:10 PM , Blogger Anu said...

    @cm-chap
    no probs!!! thx!

    hopefully you will like more of my blogs :-)

     
  • At July 1, 2007 at 1:47 AM , Blogger Sesh said...

    Hey Anu,

    Sorry 4 delayed comment.. D story s well written.. I remember u sayin dat d story wil go around 10 pages givin more details.. Kya hua??

    Thats alright.. As long as d story s interstin, as urs is, its good to read those :)

     
  • At July 2, 2007 at 10:04 PM , Blogger Anu said...

    @sesh
    hi da...yeah i had to cut it short to keep up the suspense element. If i had gone on for 10 pages with this story u would not finished reading it :-) :-)

    Anyways glad u liked it!

     

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