A Sweet Poison
I seem to have loved you,
In numberless forms, numberless times,
In life after life, in age after age forever.
My spell-bound heart has made and
re-made the necklace of songs
That you take as a gift,
wear round your neck in your many forms,
In life after life, in age after age forever.
In numberless forms, numberless times,
In life after life, in age after age forever.
My spell-bound heart has made and
re-made the necklace of songs
That you take as a gift,
wear round your neck in your many forms,
In life after life, in age after age forever.
-Rabindranath Tagore
Quoted above is an extract from one of my favorite poems. All I have to say is that it can also act as a sweet poison! Read on to find out how?
A Sweet Poison
13 Comments:
At June 24, 2007 at 6:50 AM , Ajay said...
Hey atom,
I have run out of superlatives to complement ur posts.Grrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeaaaaaatttttttt!!!.
I was a bit baffled by the PDF idea... neverthless nice one for a change... You are becoming obsessed with murdering one guy or the other in ur blogs.. Watch out guys.. here is An... our new serial killer... Just Joking!!! :-) Hey the plot was very good but i do believe that if u love someone so deeply and are angered by some of his/her actions even be it marrying or falling in love with someone else i dont think a true lover would take such drastic steps... May be he didnt love her becos she was a physcho..Well ! Opinions differ and so do people.. Great language and improvisation.. Easily ur best Post to date...
P.S. I Dunno why u scrapped the part of us coming out with motives
At June 24, 2007 at 7:01 AM , Nivi said...
REal good way of writing it.. i liked the style a lot.. The best thing was the shortness and hence the crispness of it man..well done there
Did i miss something i mean i got the motive ,i was expecting a how?
So how did she do it??
At June 24, 2007 at 12:31 PM , Anu said...
@ajay
thx a lot dude for all the superlatives!
Well im not talking abt true love here. Richa's brain is a bit disoriented and hence she does these things
Feedback here means jus how u like it... it had nothing to do with the motive :-)
@nivi
Hey thx!
Well how she did it is kinda left to the imagination of the reader...
She could have injected the stuff or interchanged a cyanide rat killer aerosol with the inhaler instrument or she could have pried open the inhaler contents and dropped cyanide powder into it etc...its purely left to imagination
At June 24, 2007 at 3:09 PM , cm chap said...
Aiming for a professional career n writing?
At June 24, 2007 at 10:55 PM , Anu said...
@cm-chap
i take that as a compliment dude! :-)
At June 25, 2007 at 9:51 AM , navien said...
Anu,such a gr888888 post yaar!!! Very crisp and stylish way of writing!!:) Again a wonderful suspense thriller:)
Its true that she even though knew him since Sid was knee high to a grasshopper was forced to resort to such drastic n knee-jerk response in dis kinda circumstances. True love when tinted , propels a person to react in an unexpected manner s absolutely agreeable.
Twist was very good towards d end!! ..Never felt Richa wud ve done dis..
The whole enchilada was interestin n grippin!!Way to go!! Ur best post till date!!
At June 25, 2007 at 9:53 AM , Confessions of a Born Procrastinator said...
i guess u already know what i am gonna say... so i ll save that part... :)
Between... beautifully presented... u got talent... Do include me in the "Thank you's" speech when you bag that booker prize... :D
At June 25, 2007 at 11:59 PM , Kartik said...
Hey An super post..... I ve become a fan of ur suspense and mystery stories.. Expect to see many more !!!
At June 26, 2007 at 2:02 AM , Anu said...
@navien
Thx dude! i did add certain stuff later jus to confuse u guys!!:-)
@confessions
hmmm thx!booker prize....whoa u have more ambitions for me then i do!:-) glad abt that!! will surely include u in my thank you speech....IF i win it("if, a two letter word for futility!"-sheldon)
@b.k
glad to know i have a FAN!!!:-) thx a lot da :-)
At June 26, 2007 at 9:38 PM , cm chap said...
Offcourse it was said as a compliment only... Sorry if the tone made u to guess other way.
At June 27, 2007 at 12:10 PM , Anu said...
@cm-chap
no probs!!! thx!
hopefully you will like more of my blogs :-)
At July 1, 2007 at 1:47 AM , Sesh said...
Hey Anu,
Sorry 4 delayed comment.. D story s well written.. I remember u sayin dat d story wil go around 10 pages givin more details.. Kya hua??
Thats alright.. As long as d story s interstin, as urs is, its good to read those :)
At July 2, 2007 at 10:04 PM , Anu said...
@sesh
hi da...yeah i had to cut it short to keep up the suspense element. If i had gone on for 10 pages with this story u would not finished reading it :-) :-)
Anyways glad u liked it!
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