Little Miss Sunshine!!

A pinch of salt, a spoonful of sugar,a mixture of condiments,a dollop of cream... so are my stories, so are my dreams!

Monday, June 11, 2007

A story left unsaid...

The sands of time had long since passed
Some inexplicable loss, her heart still possessed
that verses of music and drops of rain could not lessen..
As she wondered when would he ever return?

Every nation was at the knifes edge
It was a flame that no one could assuage
Soldiers had left home to defend their country
sadly aware that coming back may never be a fortuity

She said to herself that she will not weep
There were still great many promises to keep
which they had made with a tear and a smile
some 20 years back, as they had walked down the aisle

Her two beautiful angels were her only solace
a pillar of strength in whom she sought peace
The days went on and Seasons had passed
Will he ever come home? to herself, she oft asked

One day a miracle had taken place,the war had ceased
array of proud soldiers marched towards their crease
there was festivity in the air
coupled with all the Christmas cheer!

when his voice chanted "To all a Merry Christmas!"
The house reverberated full of life with joy and happiness...

17 Comments:

  • At June 11, 2007 at 9:51 AM , Blogger Nivi said...

    very beautifully written.. very rich man... i would have preffered a longer one man :) it was really nice to read.. So here comes the poems..awesome!!!
    Its a different art poems.. am glad you're testing the waters

     
  • At June 11, 2007 at 10:25 AM , Blogger navien said...

    Wowie !! Gr8 stuff Anu!! its heartenin to see tat u ve added another feather to ur writin skills:-)

    Entire poem was so nice but I loved d second para particularly coz it was very beautifully written!!

    Overall very nice experience dude!! Hey next time i ll expect a much more lengthy one:-) Keep postin more of dese poems!!

     
  • At June 11, 2007 at 11:51 AM , Blogger Anu said...

    @nivi
    yeah actually i wanted to write this as a story in the beggining but then thought why not explore some new..

    So it may not be gr8..since its my first of this kind...

    @navien
    Thx dude!
    actually i have just come to realize this requires more patience than writing a story which sadly i don think i possess...

    i din have the patience to make it longer.may be i would have done more justice to it when written as a prose but i jus wanted to explore in these lines too...

     
  • At June 11, 2007 at 12:30 PM , Blogger ajaygroups said...

    Hey super dude..!!!
    This piece of work requires a lot of creativity and u hav shown that ur a match to anyone writing poetry in the world...

    Great.. i dont want to point out anyone para being better than the other... The entire poem was excellent...

    Short and sweet!!.
    That describes the poem as well as its Author

     
  • At June 11, 2007 at 7:42 PM , Blogger CM-Chap said...

    Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu... good one.Day by day ur writing skills are reaching a new level.

     
  • At June 11, 2007 at 11:52 PM , Blogger Anu said...

    @ajay
    Whoa!!!never thought i would receive such a review from u...very glad!! thx dude!

    wish u had not quoted the short part of it! :-)

    @cm-chap
    Thx :-)was jus trying to explore somethin i had not done before....

     
  • At June 13, 2007 at 9:32 AM , Blogger Princess Banter said...

    Love love love it! Keep on writing, darling :)

     
  • At June 14, 2007 at 8:49 AM , Blogger sirpy said...

    Simply amazing piece of work.. Do it more often. Loved the first two lines in the fourth para. Too good yaar. Keep writing...

     
  • At June 14, 2007 at 10:13 PM , Blogger CM-Chap said...

    very busy?

     
  • At June 14, 2007 at 10:28 PM , Blogger N!kh!l said...

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  • At June 14, 2007 at 10:29 PM , Blogger N!kh!l said...

    A poem eh? Good one. Did'nt know you were into poems. Thanks for dropping by. Increase ur readers count by one now.

     
  • At June 15, 2007 at 1:51 AM , Blogger The Black King said...

    Nice...

     
  • At June 15, 2007 at 4:33 AM , Blogger SILVERLINING said...

    Hi Anu,
    Nice stuff.Excellent writing skills.Keep going.All the best for you.God Bless.

     
  • At June 15, 2007 at 9:31 PM , Blogger Anu said...

    @princess,black king n silver lining!!

    Thx...will churn out more n better in the coming days!! :-)

    @sirpy
    Thx!! but personally i like the 3rd stanza a lot..:-) glad u stopped by!

    @cm-chap
    wat?

    @nikhil
    I din know i was into poems either...jus a new kind of exploration i guess! btw i really liked your 'adieu'!keep them coming!

     
  • At June 16, 2007 at 9:30 AM , Blogger Confessions of a Born Procrastinator said...

    Man...

    Talk bout showers of appreciation.. You must be really good if ppl like it all that much.

    On a completely different track, its great to know that you have stopped killing people - for a change... :)

    Keep it up gal.. lookin forward to more

     
  • At June 17, 2007 at 1:08 AM , Blogger Anu said...

    @confessions
    i knew u wud say that!!!
    actually that man should have been killed in war but i thought u would really get mad at that part :-)

    Anyways thx dude!!:-)

     
  • At June 21, 2007 at 11:26 PM , Blogger CM-Chap said...

    I was asking..are you very busy in workk.. No updations to blog...

     

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